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Burning by *PrettyCrazy:iconPrettyCrazy:

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Burning.
My mouth is dry,
my hands are clammy,
the sheets are unbearable,
throw them off,
let the night air lick my body
with tongues of flames.

My skin is too hot -
tear it off me,
tear it away,
make the burning stop.

Rip out my heart,
warm, red, beating,
drink my hot blood,
make the burning stop.

Burning
deep down,
demand me,
command me,
devour me,
split me,
break and enter,
tear me,
rape me,
make the burning stop.
©2008-2009 *PrettyCrazy
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Submitted: April 24, 2008
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I'm not satisfied with this one yet, but I have to leave...

I had to upload anyway because later on I might lose the feeling.
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~DarkLiterature:iconDarkLiterature: Apr 24, 2008, 5:25:24 AM
oh..
oh..

:heart:

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& poetry club: ~themarrowmovement
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Apr 24, 2008, 6:05:24 AM
This is a very dark piece as if the writer wants to be completely destroyed... Well written, but hard.
*PrettyCrazy:iconPrettyCrazy: Apr 24, 2008, 6:56:22 AM
Yeah. Been reading too much of :iconpraytell:'s darker pieces, I guess. ^^

--
And miles from where you are
I lay down on the cold ground
and I
I pray that something picks me up
and sets me down
in your warm arms...
Snow Patrol

Search for enlightment at ~enlightened-poets.
*PrettyCrazy:iconPrettyCrazy: Apr 24, 2008, 7:21:24 AM
Sure I am!

I'm writing... you can start worry when I let someone actually hurt me, okay? ^^ :hug:

--
And miles from where you are
I lay down on the cold ground
and I
I pray that something picks me up
and sets me down
in your warm arms...
Snow Patrol

Search for enlightment at ~enlightened-poets.
*praytell:iconpraytell: Apr 24, 2008, 12:57:14 PM
ohhh, i see!! blame me =p great piece tho. :) and if you need to talk, you know how to get a hold of me . . .

--
post-script

mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.

-praytell
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Apr 24, 2008, 3:45:35 PM
Okay. If you say so...
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Apr 24, 2008, 5:12:17 PM
Mad fever dreams tearing the heart right outta ya...? Please write it out...It's so much better than the real thing

(\_/)
(o.0)
(UU)o ...
*PrettyCrazy:iconPrettyCrazy: Apr 25, 2008, 12:23:25 AM
I'm really touched by your caring, but don't worry too much, okay? :hug:

--
And miles from where you are
I lay down on the cold ground
and I
I pray that something picks me up
and sets me down
in your warm arms...
Snow Patrol

Search for enlightment at ~enlightened-poets.
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